No, just no.
I may be a little biased, but those who use sprites in their movies are just admitting for all of Newgrounds to see that they can't draw or even worse, they aren't willing to draw. I'm very disapointed in this type of flash artist, especially when I think there's potential in the creator.
Second of all, I was very annoyed with the sound quality. Either get a better mic or better voice recording software if you plan on doing voiceovers again. Not only did that cancel out the potentially funny parts, it also ruins the professional vibe that a flash cartoon can have.
I'd like to see more of your stuff, just try actually drawing what you do next time and I think you can do really good.